Learning the Rules
Sep 26, 2024
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The rules and strategy of the tournament are based on my own personal experience practicing western martial arts with mixed weapon styles. It's hard to balance realism and the action/drama necessary for the narrative, but it was fun to write. Hopefully people it more interesting than Ceilsea!
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Your highness if you don't --> add comma after "highness"
wizards downward --> wizard's downward
since their musical --> since they're musical
wait right into --> wade right into
my friendship not yours --> add comma after friendship
known each other. --> additional line after other.
This tournament has good rules. Mandated breaks? Self-control? Rules for treating...wearing gloves...all seems so reasonable. :D
It doesn't seem to me like Shae can improve quickly enough in swordmanship even if they have a few days...so they must win some other way. I assume they win. Right?
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