I like the preparation. It's good to see when strategy is estabilished before the characters jump into the fray, sometimes there's a lot of rush to the action and it's cool to see this work does otherwise. Also. I think at "Auro's State", if you mean the plot of Land that Auro owns, I think you might have meant "Auro's Estate", but the politics of the island they are on might be different. Either way, great work!
"When a boy wakes up on a beach unable to remember anything about himself, he tries to get some answers in the city next to it.
However, after an incident involving some local kids, it becomes clear that he holds the key to change the course of history. This will make him the target of everyone in power as they all try to get control over him, by any means necessary."
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