Ch 2, The cave
Dec 13, 2024
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Good twist with the dragon having a conversation/also wanting to help Jinx become a better wizard. I’m curious how these familiars are aware of someone like Jinx by name.
“Jinx knew that this was just the beginning of their adventure together.” Might be a little too on the nose. Maybe as the final sentence it’d be okay, but right in the middle of the climactic action piece, it stood out as forced.
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