I promised you an epic ending for this prologue, hope i succeeded!
Please let me know, there's no better time than now that the prologue is over to write a complete
review/critique/comment whatever you want, but any form of feedback is really appreciated!
The true mark of darkness is starting soon, stay tuned guys if you got hooked because this is just the tip of the iceberg, i have so many ideas for future chapters!
This chapter is so freaking awesome! How this chapter ends is just... just... AMAZING!
He walks on his own path. The path he walk is gray. He himself said that he is "neither heads or tails." Also mean neither good or evil. This is why I meant walk in a gray path. There is not white or black. "A middle finger to everything else." Is just too awesome way to end it!
Anyways... So the 'two parents' he killed were just adopted? Or he mean by 'true parents' are the regent? I am so confuse!
Good.Evil.Manipulation.Knowledge.Power.Corruption.
Can a single individual win
against a group of corrupted
inviduals who have power
and control over an
entire kingdom?
Mark of Darkness is a Dark Fantasy heavily Psychological/Philosphical, but also rich of action, where you can see everything, but most likely not clichès. Hopefully.
It won't be a typical journey.
All we know so far is that some Regents managed to change a Democracy into a Monarchy, with a plan that lasted years. Now they are called the Peace Warrantors, yet they caused the Great Starvation and no one knows. What are they aiming at? How will the other Kingdoms react?
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