The final page of our long, silent prologue! What did you think? Did we do a good job of bringing the prologue storylines together? Did we establish the atmosphere and mystery of our story effectively? What was your favorite page so far?
Starting with the next page, we begin to meet characters that speak and start to learn about the crux of our story! Crazytown.
So I went back and re-read the eleven pages, and I have to say, they look masterful when all put together and read in one go! So excited to start the story proper (plus very curious about Mr. Silent Protagonist's death? and its possible implications. The reveal of the barbarians fighting turning out to be a video game was awesome!
ATONEMENT is a gritty Space Opera about flawed, beautiful, ambitious, frightening people struggling to ensure that humanity makes history before they become it.
Atonement updates with new pages every other Tuesday.
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