It was 2:11 a.m. when Ren slipped past the perimeter gate.
The orphan dome’s security grid pulsed with faint blue arcs, programmed to alert on biometric misreads. Ren didn’t trigger it—he knew the rhythms. Knew which panel flickered half a second slower. Knew the exact pressure needed to trip the false lock but not the real one.
He’d done this before. In another loop. Maybe more than once.
The chipped slate Kairo had given him was tucked inside his inner coat, wrapped in copper mesh. He could feel its presence—heavy, wrong, humming like a heartbeat he didn’t trust.
The abandoned maintenance bunker outside the dome wasn’t far. A rusting pre-collapse shelter filled with analog tools and stripped gear. It used to belong to the dome’s original engineering crew before the Authority automated everything.
No cameras. No drones. No uplink.
Exactly what he needed.
The door groaned as he shoved it open. Dust spiraled through the stale air. Moonlight filtered in through a broken fan vent.
He swept the room for tripwires, then booted an old terminal using hand-crank power. The screen blinked amber. A miracle it still worked.
On the wall above the terminal, barely visible beneath a layer of grime, were words scratched deep into the metal:
“We tried. They reset us anyway.”
He slipped the chip into a hardened slate with no network ports. The second it made contact, the screen glitched—then stabilized.
A voice spoke. Male. Ragged.
“Echo log 4-9-7. If you’re hearing this… then the reset failed again.”
Ren froze.
“Name doesn’t matter. I’ve gone by too many. I was like you—burned, rebooted, lied to. The Echo wasn’t built for us. It was built for containment.”
Static fuzzed the screen.
“The system isn’t the top layer. There’s something beneath it. They call it the Watcher Protocol. It activates when a node reaches 63% variance or higher.”
[Ren’s System: CURRENT VARIANCE: 48.9% — WARNING: RISING]
“They don’t want us to win. They want us to loop forever. Burn us out. Archive the failures. I found four divergence sites—anchor points where the loop code thins. Go there, and you might find truth. Or at least a cleaner death.”
The screen flickered. A map overlay bloomed: four red dots across Neo-Tokyo. One blinked near the wastelands of Sector Five.
“Don’t trust anyone flagged with Observer clearance. If they find you, they won’t kill you. They’ll rewrite you.”
A pause.
“Don’t become me.”
The screen cut out.
[SIGNAL INTERFERENCE DETECTED. UNSANCTIONED NODE ACCESS – TRACE BEGINNING.]
[RECOMMENDATION: DISCONNECT.]
Ren yanked the chip out.
The terminal sparked—then died.
Silence.
But not quite.
Behind him: a footstep.
He spun—blade half-drawn—
—and froze when he saw Ayane.
She stood in the doorway, eyes wide, wearing a loose jacket over her nightclothes. “I followed you,” she said.
Of course she had.
“You’re hiding something,” she said. “Something huge.”
“Ayane—”
“I saw the screen. I heard what he said.” She stepped closer. “Ren... what’s a loop?”
He opened his mouth. Closed it. The words didn’t come.
“I’m not stupid. I’ve seen the way you fight. How you react to things before they happen.”
She was trembling.
“You’ve been here before. Haven’t you?”
The silence was its own confession.
Ayane backed away, heart breaking across her face. “And you let me die. Didn’t you?”
[SYSTEM NOTICE: NODE TRAJECTORY CRITICAL. EMOTIONAL TRIGGER EVENT DETECTED.]
She turned to leave.
As she did, her breath caught. For just a second, her vision flickered—a static line across her view. A tone, high and clear, echoed in her mind and nowhere else.
[NEW NODE THREAD – AYANE – UNLOCKED] [ECHO FIELD INITIALIZING... STANDBY]
Ren didn’t move.
The chip in his hand suddenly felt radioactive.
Everything was unraveling.
And for the first time since returning, Ren felt the terrifying certainty of it:
This loop wasn’t his to control anymore.
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