0 - Unsteady Rhythm
May 17, 2025
A call from the boss was what Isaac needed to make his day not like any other. The melody changed its tone. And so did the flowers.
wanyelachu
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Thanks for the hard work! The title of the story is very suitable because Isaac looks like he is heavy smoker, and it is original. I loved that there were brief religious mentions (even though I'm not a Christian) and Sherlock Holmes :) Of course, as a Sherlock Holmes fan, I went crazy! The art style is perfect and unique. 💖🥺. But I noticed mistakes in drawings; for example, sometimes Adam's eyes are dark and sometimes they are light coloured. I didn't understand what color his eyes were. It doesn't seem like it's because of the light; you should be careful about shading. Secondly, Adam has 2 moles on his left cheek, and sometimes there is only one. He didn't have a mole in the drawing when he was little; the moles are missing. Other than that, I didn't see any mistakes; it looks promising. I am definitely waiting for the second part 🏃♀️🤸♀️👸.
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