Wanted to share the original draft to look back at and see how much I’ve improved (maybe not much on the background end- but if we’re being honest I didn’t work on that even a little while I was revamping the story 😅). Also to be clear- Diego and Terrence are NOT RELATED in the new version. Funnily enough, I ended up switching Diego and Terrence’s relationships in the revamp, Diego was originally supposed to be familial and Panora was supposed to be Romantic, but now their roles are reversed 😅
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