Among the dunes of a distant desert, where the homes of a people of Arabs are located, a mother lived there with her only son, and all that was left for her from the world after the desert swallowed her husband in its vast expanse one night, and she was unaware that he was a ruler with wealth and lineage, he decided to asceticism in life and abandon the manifestations of luxury, and she hoped that he would return to her one day, her memory has not passed since that day, and it seems that someone is after her only son, he is of Royal Blood ..
Check your grammar. For comic text, usually you should avoid having 1-2 words of a new sentence end a line. That exposition dump at the start felt really rushed and forced.
Drawings are very nice. Characters are well drawn. I like your sketchy shadows and pleasant color palettes. Panel layouts seem good.
After the legitimate ruler fled in search of self and asceticism in a luxurious life, the kingdom of the Arabs was divided between Cousins, into 5 distant states, one of the rulers wanted to unite the country under one banner after the Tatar Kingdom came close to overthrowing the kingdom of the Arabs, news spreadThat the king married one of the villagers and spent his life with her and had a son named DIAA, so the ruler decided from that moment to prepare him to rule until the country unites before the country is occupied by the Tatars
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