Chapter nine
Oct 26, 2025
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This chapter took a long time because of how much I changed in not only this chapter but the previous one as well. So initially they were going to easily pay for the prosthetic but I decided to change it up with having them using all their money, and now I may or may not have dug myself into the hole of where are they supposed to stay since they were initially going to be allowed to stay in an inn on that road for free because of an incident that happened. But now with how I'm characterising Balm, Bougainvillea and Chestnut with the Olsharlian's I don't think it would be appropriate, at least not for now. Adding onto this, I don't know how obvious it is in the chapter, but I'm planning on having Balm, Bougainvillea and Chestnut be racist towards the Olsharlian's, not in a physical and shouting way, but in a complacent, we don't talk about them, avoid them sort of way. Of course, since this relates to real life, if I feel that I cannot handle it sensibly or anything like that then I will change it since I don't want to make real life situations be seen as a light issue. Anyway, thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed, and as perusual, let me know if there's anything that can be improved on.
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