This is an edited version of Ruinous Fortune, that has new dialogue, some retcons and new pages.
I decided to format the pages different for Tapas/Webtoons to fit it better for these platforms.
The scene where Lilith, Lenore and Gael probably is the biggest change... Originally I had bigger plans for Lenore.. Framing of murder of her ex, who was a politician and thus assassinated but survived. This is a big reason for why Lenore and Gael already had a deal going as we met them, it was all just too complicated to open on and would have taken too long to draw.
Now it ended up cut and Lenore's deal is simplified, and I have an easier time showing Lenore and Gael's first meeting as well.
Also Gael's new armour! I didn't realize that most people did not know it was them at first? That and I did not like the design so I redid it to make it clearer and they look sooo much hotter in it. Little victories..
Gael Fortuna survived the cataclysmic Beast of Oborion by sheer luck as a baby. They ended up being adopted by Cayden The Crown of Oborion, personification of death and the cruel king of the fae dominion of the same name.
Despite having been raised to be Cayden’s right hand they continually doubt his judgement and rule. Everything changes however when they meet Lenore a convicted murderer and Lilith a goblin who mysteriously sprang back to life.
Updates every Monday!
Ruinous Fortune is meant for 18+ readers featuring dark fantasy elements, at times graphic violence, horror elements.
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