This is an edited version of Ruinous Fortune, that has new dialogue, some retcons and new pages.
I decided to format the pages different for Tapas/Webtoons to fit it better for these platforms.
Originally I wanted there to be a lot more mystery to who Lilith was and why she was killed, but again it all got overcomplicated. The main issue is that Bela is meant to be smart.. I had to find a convoluted way for why he would have killed her and how she got resurrected, which he would not allow to happen if he knew. Prisma, though? Easy, they do not believe in safety measures.
Also I realized that the skeleton key stuff could be hoisted on to her to make her arrival more loadbearing and a necesarry step rather than just a thing that happened. Make Gael seem less like a bad friend for keeping Pandoro in the chest for that long.
Gael Fortuna survived the cataclysmic Beast of Oborion by sheer luck as a baby. They ended up being adopted by Cayden The Crown of Oborion, personification of death and the cruel king of the fae dominion of the same name.
Despite having been raised to be Cayden’s right hand they continually doubt his judgement and rule. Everything changes however when they meet Lenore a convicted murderer and Lilith a goblin who mysteriously sprang back to life.
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Ruinous Fortune is meant for 18+ readers featuring dark fantasy elements, at times graphic violence, horror elements.
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