Chapter 1 - Childhood memories Part 1 of 2
Feb 04, 2026
I made the file a bit big. I tried to show everything in the novel in chapter 1, so sorry, there will be a part 2.
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Not sure where the story is going. So much is happening already. It feels like you could focus more on an event opener which will build up the plot. I guess with a novel it's more difficult because you are trying to convert it directly from that.
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