so in my original draft, they ate dinner and talked about their day for like 4 more pages. it gave more expository details on their life, but as i worked on it, i realized its kinda way too early for that, so i cut it and reworked most of the dinner to a 1 page montage sorta deal, so we can get to a bit more cute dynamic building, followed by the plot actually kicking off.
also had to break the 180 rule to make the flow of the footsie panel make sense. the fact that i then flip back i hope translates as a sorta spinning wheel shot.
Zack Kuroneko and Spencer Waters are an cute couple of guys living their simple lives together in Bluvale, Cascadia. but things take a turn for the wacky when one day some weird things begin to happen to Zack. strange wants and feelings. the sun feels so nice to lay in, and the birds look all to fun to chase.
Zack has become a Werecat!
Now these two need to navigate the new hazards that come when one of them becomes a certified Feline Romantic~
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