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The Guide of the Backrooms

Chapter 12: The System Error

Chapter 12: The System Error

Aug 24, 2026

The glitching hounds didn't care about tactical commands.

The largest beast, its jaw flickering violently between solid flesh and grey static, lunged directly past David and slammed its full weight into the lead Syndicate guard.
ZAP-CRACK!
The guard’s plasma-rifle went off blindly as he collapsed into the mud. A bolt of white-hot energy tore through the humid air, missing David’s ear by inches and blasting a smoking, molten crater into the concrete wall behind him.
"Move, you idiot!" Garcia hissed.
Garcia’s iron grip clamped onto David’s collar. He violently yanked him backward into the brush just as the second guard started firing wildly into the chaotic mess of teeth and black armor.
They ran.

[Vertical Space: Long scroll down to simulate a breathless, exhausting sprint alongside the wall]

David’s lungs burned. His legs felt like lead, weighted down by the thick, warm jungle mud. Every instinct screamed at him to look back, to chase the roaring engine of the armored transport that was stealing Lisa away.
I was too late.
I was right there, and I was too late.
"Don't stop!" Garcia panted, his breath ragged. "The light! It's turning!"
Behind them, the massive searchlight swept across the ferns, cutting through the fog like a blade. The mechanical whir of its gears grew louder, closing in on their position.
Up ahead, the endless concrete wall finally offered a flaw. A heavy, rusted drainage grate, choked with dead vines and corroded by the sunless atmosphere, blocked a small opening at the base.
Garcia didn't hesitate. He grabbed a heavy chunk of discarded, rusted pipe from the gravel.
CLANG!
He smashed it against the rusted iron bars once. Twice. On the third strike, the brittle metal snapped inward, revealing a pitch-black, descending chute.
"Down!" Garcia yelled, shoving David toward the opening just as a plasma bolt exploded against the concrete above them, raining sharp, burning debris onto their backs.
David tumbled forward into the dark.

[Vertical Space: A long, pitch-black drop to transition between environments]

They hit the ground hard.
The soft, squelching mud of the jungle vanished instantly, replaced by the unforgiving impact of cold, cracked linoleum.
David lay there for a long moment, staring up into a darkness so absolute it felt heavy. The oppressive, suffocating heat of the rotting ferns was gone. A draft cut through his shredded clothes—a draft so freezing and sterile it turned the sweat on his skin to ice.
Then came the sound.
Bzzzzzzzz.
The low, maddening, rhythmic hum of old fluorescent tubes.
David slowly pushed himself up, his hands trembling. He didn't feel the physical pain of the fall. He only felt the crushing weight of the empty space beside him. Lisa’s face, pale and strapped to that mechanical stretcher, flashed behind his eyes.
"No..." David whispered, his voice cracking. He slammed his fist against the hard floor. "No! We have to go back up! We have to track that truck!"
"Go back up?" Garcia’s voice cut through the dark, devoid of its usual manic edge. A lighter flickered, illuminating Garcia’s pale, rigid face. "Look around you, boy. There is no 'up' anymore. We noclipped. We are miles away from that perimeter."
"I don't care!" David roared, lunging forward and grabbing Garcia by the jacket. "She's gone, Garcia! Bunik has her! If I don't go back, she's a corpse! Just like that woman in the mud!"
"And if you go back out there right now, you're just giving Bunik another rat for his needle!" Garcia snapped, violently shoving David off him. "You want to help her? Then stay alive long enough to figure out our next move."
David froze, his chest heaving as the cold air bit into his throat. Garcia was right. Anger wouldn't break through Syndicate armor.
Garcia held the lighter higher.
They weren't in a simple tunnel. They were standing in an infinite, labyrinthine grid of grey, fabric-covered office cubicles. But unlike the empty layout of Level 0, every single desk here was piled high with heavy, outdated CRT monitors.
Suddenly, a row of screens directly to their left flickered to life all at once.
POP-STATIC.
The screens showed grainy, black-and-white camera feeds. David staggered toward them, his eyes scanning the monitors. One showed an automated turret rotating in the fog. Another showed a long, empty hallway lined with cubicles.
"Wait," Garcia whispered, his voice dropping to a terrified breath. "Look at the next desk over."
David looked. A different monitor on the neighboring desk flickered to life. It showed the exact hallway they were currently standing in—but from a high angle.
And something was walking down it.
The figure wore a tattered, dark law enforcement uniform, but its posture was entirely wrong. It moved with a jerky, twitching, rubbery stride. As it stepped underneath a flickering light, the camera feed revealed its face. It was a nightmare of melted flesh and exposed teeth, a monstrous, elongated jaw stitched loosely into a crude imitation of a human expression. It wore a cracked officer's badge pinned directly into its rotting chest.
The Warden.
David and Garcia crouched low behind a fabric cubicle wall, their hearts hammering. On the monitor closest to David's face, they watched the entity halt.
The Warden tilted its head, its jaw unzipping with a wet, tearing sound. It didn't have vocal cords, but a sound tore from its throat—a flat, mechanical recording of a human voice, completely devoid of emotion.
"Freeze."
The monitor speaker crackled with static.
"Stop. You are under arrest."
On the screen, The Warden turned its monstrous face directly toward the security camera. It knew they were watching. It began to sprint toward their position, its limbs bending at impossible angles.
But the audio didn't just come from the monitor speaker.
From the dark corridor directly behind David's back, a wet, heavy boot stepped onto the linoleum floor. A shadow stretched over the top of their cubicle wall.
"Freeze," a voice mimicked right behind his ear, loud and ice-cold. "Under arrest."

[Vertical Space: High-intensity, frantic scroll sequence]

David didn't breathe.
The wet, rhythmic snapping of the Warden's jaw echoed inches above his head. The air grew heavy with the stench of copper and old leather.
"Stop," the entity mimicked again, the voice vibrating through the fabric wall. "Stop. Under arrest."
Garcia caught David’s eye. Slowly, with agonizing precision, Garcia pointed to the CRT monitor on the desk right next to them.
Because the maze was a mirror.
On the screen, they could see the back of the Warden’s uniform. It was facing the cubicle to their left. It thought they were hidden one row over.
Garcia held up three fingers. Then two. Then one.
They dove flat onto the cold linoleum, sliding under the narrow gap beneath the office desks just as the Warden smashed its heavy, rubbery arms straight through the fabric partition where they had been sitting.
CRASH!
Grey insulation and plastic debris rained down on David's back.
"Freeze," the Warden’s voice warped, the pitch glitching into a deep, guttural bass. "Fre-e-eze."
They scrambled through the underbelly of the cubicles. On every desk they passed, the monitors flickered, tracking their movement against the jerking, twitching silhouette of the officer pursuing them.
"The main terminal!" David gasped, his knees scraping against the hard floor. "Garcia, look at the screens! There’s a master desk in the center!"
A massive, glowing green console stood under a buzzing ring of fluorescent lights forty yards away. They couldn't sneak anymore. The Warden’s heavy boots were slamming against the floor, picking up speed, its limbs snapping into a terrifying, spider-like sprint.
"Run!" Garcia roared.
They burst from the underside of the desks, sprinting full tilt toward the green console. Behind them, the Warden rounded the corner, its elongated jaw unzipped completely down to its collarbone, exposing rows of black, needle-like teeth.
"YOU ARE UNDER ARREST!" it screeched, a patchwork of five different stolen voices playing at maximum volume.
David reached the terminal first. His fingers flew across the clacking, mechanical keyboard, slamming the manual override switch.
CLACK-BEEP.
A heavy, motorized security shutter began to grind downward from the ceiling, separating the main console from the maze. The Warden lunged. Its mangled, pale hand forced its way under the closing metal gate, its claws scraping against the floor just inches from David's boots.
SLAM.
The shutter locked into place. The violent pounding from the other side shook the entire console, but the steel held.

[Vertical Space: Sudden silence, panel dims to focus entirely on the screen]

David collapsed against the terminal, his chest heaving. "We're trapped."
"No," Garcia breathed, staring at the main console screen. "Look what you unlocked."
The terminal screen bypassed the local security loop. A direct satellite uplink from the surface level forced its way onto the monitor, displaying a blinking tracking line moving toward: [BASE SHALOT - SECTOR 4].
Right next to it, a window labeled Transport Interior - Transit Cam 03 flickered into high definition. The feed showed the back of the armored truck. Lisa was lying on the iron stretcher, perfectly still. The plastic tube was still taped over her mouth.
"Lisa..." David whispered, pressing his trembling hand against the warm, static-charged glass. "Hold on. Please, just hold on."
But the nightmare wasn't over.
On the monitor, Lisa's fingers suddenly twitched. Her spine violently buckled upward at an impossible, rubbery angle, mirroring the exact, horrific choreography they had witnessed in the jungle. Her arms twisted stiffly in their sockets. Her head snapped sideways, turning directly toward the hidden camera lens.
Her eyes tore open.
They weren't white. They were completely void, solid, matte black, absorbing all the light inside the transport.
At the bottom of the screen, a single block of glitched, red system text began to aggressively overlay the feed:
CRITICAL ERROR: SUBJECT REBOOTING.
ENTITY ESSENCE BINDING: 84%...
Lisa's black eyes stared through the screen, straight into David's soul.
And then, she smiled.
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