A gift becomes a beginning. A signal becomes a warning. And somewhere in the dark, something is getting closer. See you in the VOID at: https://www.instagram.com/alisdimension/
Okay, buckle up people because I have WORDS!!
first, the backgrounds! They look absolutely stunning and I can tell you put lots of effort into them, second you putting that little detail of him looking into sherans eyes and just staring? I can't tell if it's because he likes his eyes or just Shiney things.(let's hope it's option one🤞) third! The amount of world building you did in this chapter was a lot, but you managed to fit it in a way that felt smooth and natural unlike some other books I've read, That's really hard to do. Fourth, THE BACKPACK!! nothing more about that I just love the backpack. Fifth(jezz this is long) it's so cute that when ter exepted his idea for the name of the ship sheran blushed! Ter's smile was so wide and honestly after what happened before I would be surprised if he DIDNT blush😅(which is good of course, since I love the way your progressing they're relationship!) Overall I love this chapter and I cannot wait for the next one:) (I hope this isn't to long)
Ter is a thief. A good one—reckless enough to steal a power he doesn’t understand… and can’t get rid of. Bound to an ancient force known as the Keyverse, he becomes the galaxy’s most wanted—and is swiftly sentenced to death. But when his path crosses with Sheran, a devout soldier, one unexpected choice changes everything: instead of letting him die, Sheran helps him escape. Now on the run together, the two must outrun those hunting the Keyverse… and uncover why it chose Ter in the first place.
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