Thank you for all of your answers and explanations. Personally, although they are a bit confusing, I think you should keep the pages the way they are. So long as you explain things a bit more later on, I believe keeping some of the mystery is a good thing.
Crafters Vallono and Arrillum journey to magic's origin, the Castle Fold. But the way is expensive, guarded by a maze of celestial gatekeepers who won’t let Crafters back into the stronghold so easily.
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