Alone
Dec 11, 2016
Thanks for 11 Subscribers allready, guys! This is amazing <3
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The last panel took me like forever :) I did less this weekend to chill out after Patterns in Snow had consumed me this much but I had to finish of the next part of this. :D Lot´s of Metaphors in this (black equals memory/something that happened in the past.
Copper Mouflon
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Hey there :) Read the first few pages. Way too early to say anything about the story, I'll wait for a few more episodes.
A small comment if I may, run all the words and dialogues you will be using through a word processor, like Microsoft Word. I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes in your pages as well as in your story description. (I usually have a few typos in my scripts as well, which is why I double check them). I'm sure you can spot them all by using spell check and correct what you can. I think it will look better without them :D other than that keep up the work!
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Now she doesn´t allow herself to even remember.
All she´s got is her son.
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