I just came across your comic and I really love your art and I'm looking forward to the future updates :)
I only have one criticism; I think sometimes you add a bit too much "blank" space, by that I mean like the really long white pages or like in this update the really long dark page at the end. I don't think it's bad to include blank space(for transitions or used to create an impact) but I just think they could be shorter. The long blank spaces I feel are a bit distracting and sometimes interrupt the flow of the story. But aside from that I think you are doing a great job ^-^.
Ibarra is a normal student who seem to have fallen in love at first sight with a beautiful senior at his university. He thought his senior was female, but what he failed to realise is his senior is actually a very straight male.
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