Prologue 6
Feb 02, 2017
Page 6 of the 6 page Prologue.
The last page of the Prologue, folks! Next week we shift to the present!
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The Masked Mysadaean
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What the heck? Did the two cops walk away from eachother in those panels and then walk back to eachother?? That's a bit of an odd way to portray those scenes. Perhaps panel three, you could show Green (The Guy with the Green Tie) walking away, and to show him walking back in panel 5. It'd mean making those panels again, but with it zoomed out to show the motions that Green makes, but even so: this is just a minor artistic hiccup, that when you think of it, just leads to too many answers. (The question is, how did he get from here to here in these panels)
All in all, still good art, but the story has yet to shine, but that's because it hasn't had that much time to show itself just yet. But I am honestly sitting on edge in my seat wondering what'll happen next.
629/1000, will continue to read; Earnestly Hoping to raise my opinion of this.
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