It was once said that the human soul could accomplish astonishing wonders with the boundless power of Dreams. Now, not a soul left on the planet Mondrea could conjure up one if their life depended on it.
In the cliffside port town of Lufe Cape, a young man is jolted awake in the dead of night, remembering only flashes of what might have been and two simple words ringing in his head: "LEAVE NOW."
Honey, I need to throw my shoe at you cuz this is AWESOME! Whoa! I normally skim thru lots of prose/narrative/dialog, but this...THIS is like reading a wonderful book. Can't tear my eyes away and images burst into my head. Now that's the written words on here. THE ART IS MAGNIFICENT! I am enjoying this guy's character design. Ohhhh, I loved him from the first when he was being killed with that stake trying to save the girl. His tension, need, struggle, man, just...Awesome! Then this "guide" that reminds him of his mother has the BEST personality EVER! Hahahaha...her slang/slurred words, her sassiness...I was glued. I'll be commenting as I read on. You have aced this. Thank you for sharing your talent, skills, imagination, and hard work! Luv and hugs to you, JetFalco!
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The power of Dreams built the planet of Mondrea, but all that remains of that power is a whisper. Follow Falco on his journey to discover how that whisper can become a roar.
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