Chapter 0.1 My girl
Feb 02, 2017
"Just like Kurt once said "My girl, my girl, don't talk crap about my girl", or something along those lines..." -Dylan Brown
Neil Ribsy
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Hey I saw your stuff on DA and followed your link here. I really like the artwork and the story seems interesting too. However, I think it would be better if you used a sans serif font for the word balloons and keep some space between the text and the balloon borders as well. Aside from that, it looks quite nice!
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