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Feb 22, 2017
Creator
Hey!! How do you guys do?
I've been for weeks thinking in a good story to put here, so if you are having some troubles understanding, just tell me! Critiques will be okay too!
Well, first, for you to don't get confused: they don't speak the same language. The little girl is talking recklessly while our main character is just crying by the wall LOL
But relax! I promise you, both of them will grow up with time (and undertand things a little bit I hope), I still have huge plans for them ;)
So pleeease *aegyo face* tell me through likes and comments what you guys think and if you liked the story!;w; After all, nobody wants to work for nothing, right?
See ya!
Top comment
I really like the story and the art. But if I may add, the paneling is a bit confusing. It would flow better if you made the panels in an easier to read matter, and spaced out some of the images. I really do like it so far, so keep up the good work.^^
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