Year 1 page 1
Mar 07, 2017
Bella Bleu
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Lil critique: Jason's speech bubbles are a dark color red with talk text on it, making the words hard to see and understand. So maybe pick a lighter color for the bubble, or use a lighter color for the text and everything with be fine. And maybe I'm critiquing nothing. My phone is currently on the lowest brightness level.
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