Here an action packed adventure story. The world wasn't civilized. There was no well established law. Only one law was, the law of the jungle. Darkness was everywhere. The Hell was uprising.
This is really interesting! The plot is very well thought out but I could suggest reading over your script. There's a few words spelled wrong. Try improving your grammar and choice of words too. It'll make the story more engaging to the readers.
Here an action packed adventure story. The world wasn't civilized. There was no well established law. Only one law was, the law of the jungle. Darkness was everywhere. The Hell was uprising.
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