PAGES 122-127
Mar 30, 2017
You think that the Alacrán has died in the middle of the explosion ???
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The Masked Mysadaean
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Really good story this far in, and I think your english and artwork has been going very well so far. However; I think I see multiple mistakes, and they aren't really that big, but some people would be way annoyed by it. Whereas I'd use it as an excuse to compliment you, talk with you in text, and also to ask if you'd like to employ me as a translator and/or editor and/or writer... I don't really have high expectations at this point in my life, Trump extinguishes them daily.
Typo #1 in panel 13: I guess that you meant "I think he was vaporized by the blast" which sounds more realistic, unless Lucy discussed what happened off panel. And odds are that the blast would've been vaporized as well too.
Typo #2 in panel 19: I would've pointed out 18, but then I remembered WIB is Wherever it be, but you forgot to put the word "There" between "And this time" "are many more".
Typo #3 in panel 20: I think that Behr meant to say "It seems that these attacks are endless" or "Wow, they're relentless". Either one can work, or others. In the end, the current one can work as long as you replace "This" with "These".
Like I said, you're doing very well, and I intend to continue enjoying the comic. Would you like a free Splundergiggie?
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