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Jul 22, 2017
im a moron
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Whew, finally, that's all five of them (probably best to merge all five of these episodes as a single episode, because it was a bit of a hassle to swipe through each episode to learn just a bit of info, might as well read all these character sheets in one place so its not that much of a hassle...)
a little bit annoyed that I had to wait 5 weeks for 5 character sheets when that time could be used telling the story, but hey, the character sheets are all out so I can't complain
this may sound a bit harsh, but word of advice, don't make people feel like they've wasted their time...
I've been there, done that, don't want you to fall in the same trap next time
keep things that don't progress plot minimal or covered briefly and make sure it doesn't take too much of the reader's time. especially if it uploads on a schedule and all people get this week is a page that isn't the story... and that's done more than 2 times
all I otta say
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