I think The Encounter has good potential to be prominent. But there're reasons which has bored me from reading it:
The dialogues are written by broken English.
Fighting scenes are a mess.
I don't mean to discourage you from making comic by criticizing you like this. Instead, you should keep improving your skill and language. Should you find yourself good enough then i suggest that you go back to the beginning and redrawn it.
(Hiatus Process) A young adult is a villain and attends a hero academy because of her grandmother is also part of a hero. She will face the Hero Society and save the world from the white mask?
Will she survive it?
GL, Action, Fantasy, Shoujo, Humor, Advantage, Hero, Villain, and more.
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