Man your characters.. they're all so real. Like Blake isn't just a jerk for plot but he's like.. an actual kid reacting to losing his friend and like.. not everyone is gonna be all sympathetic in life to stuff like that. Grief is different for everyone and you're doing a swell job at portraying that
Here’s the gist of it. Dallas Margolin thought things were going to be okay. He was about to graduate high school. He was Willow Grove’s star baseball player. He had good friends. Overcoming things from the past, You’d think, for once, the universe was kind to Dallas. That is, until one day, before an important highschool match, his best friend Malek starts planning to move away for college. In an attempt to make Malek stay with him, Dallas makes a terrible mistake.