Chapter 1 Part 3
Jul 14, 2017
Edit: Fixed the Text's Color
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Dang, Saki broke the magic front door down.
Eh, I'm trying to made a new series, but I don't really have much for it. The final part of the first chapter is coming...eventually. It's a bit long I guess.
Edit: Fixed the background.
im a moron
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those last three panels though
ten oua ten
(also the text really threw me off for a sec, as I got confused of who's talking to who, I suggest that you use some form of speech bubbles, or lines leading to the mouth then to the text or something, note that not every piece of text needs a line, just so we know who's saying the first and second line... I'm sure the different fonts and Saki and Rupunzel Jr use for speech will be enough after the two "hand holding" lines for readers to then just guess who's talking)
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