Chapter 1- Pg. 6-10
Jul 26, 2017
Ready for classes, Animation runs into one of her fellow friends and helps her out of future detention of wearing the wrong clothing. Then again, why does she have a name, but no one else does?
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(RAR) The text is a little hard to read. There's nothing wrong with having colored text for speech outside of bubbles (Orangeplum does this), but it would be a good idea to make your text in colors that stand out a lot more from the background color. The colors you have on screen are too close in value and shade for me to read them easily. Use brighter, more intense colors, or outline them in white like Orangeplum does.
I'm not sure what's happening in the first few panels. I can't really tell what I'm looking at.
I can appreciate the 4th wall break, though.
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They never wanted to almost being burned alive
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