Well, raw first page.
Here from right to left:
1. Commander of the 7th squad (John)
2. Black Dog (usual pilot for 7th squad but not a constant team member)
3. Hurricane (Dell) second in command for 7th squad

First chapter gonna be tough for me in the sense that except for the faces and basic scripts I have almost nothing prepared or developed.
No weapon design, no ship design. Cloth, surroundings, buildings from inside and outside, equipment, vehicles, technologies – NOTHING.
I do this all directly in process of pagemaking.
Here I spend embarrassing amount of time developing ship design. The interior is still under question. I have no specific phone design either. Headphones on Black Dog’s head (dude still nameless -_-) far from something original.

So far not very sci-fi.
Damn.
And what about ship panel of control? No idea.
Will be some digital shit. Touchscreens and holograms mixed with buttons and levers.
Fuel? DON’T EVEN ASK.

OK, as I said – will be difficult. So pages in the first chapter will have this raw and unfinished look
(until I’ll figure out what I am doing).
Primal reason? I don’t want to fall into usual artist trap of redrawing this shit hundreds millions of time.

This approach leaves me a lot of freedom in fixing details before pages final look

In conclusion, working on details in process.