My husband thought the overhead shots in this scene were a giant monster mouth. He thought it was so creepy! I will make the environments in the next issue more distinct to avoid future confusion!
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I agree, too much shading. And the 1st overhead looks like the girls r small enough to b flushed down the toilet : ) Maybe better eye to proportioning. Still loving' it tho
Rated PG-13.
First Issue:
Two twins, Emi and Emma, decide to play a fun supernatural game they looked up online, called 'The Bath Game.' This is what happens.
Drawn with sharpie, indie ink, and pens on sketchbook paper. Lettered and corrected digitally.
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