Chapter 4-The Elder
Dec 31, 2014
Lyne St-Jules
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You know what could work better, instead of stopping the story to explain something? Is if you made a page before the chapter explaining it, so when it comes around, the reader is ready for it and the story doesn't pause for a second.
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