The Initiation (part 01)
Oct 21, 2017
Wow! 1k+ subs?! it's not Halloween yet and you guys scare me good! thank you so much guys^^ love you!
English is'nt my forte, please let me know if i made some mistakes so i could learn^^
Re-uploaded and Fixed, Thanks for all Commentators, I love you guys!
Snowbunnychan
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Hey! Just a tip, instead of "grook" use "snore" for the sleeping scene. Other than that, I don't see any mistake. Good job!
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