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Nov 04, 2017
im so gomen for the inconsistent style. im trying my best orz
Dawgofdawgness
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Oooh, plot! The story is really interesting so far and the side characters are all pretty charming. I really enjoy your comic but if I have to be nitpicky, I would suggest bringing out Ollie's personality more - the MC is usually the most boring character in a story, but I feel like she has a lot of potential of being a good character. So far I haven't been as interested in her character as I have been with the others. Other than that, loving Moon River so far!
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Ollie's summer plans involved doing boring adult things ; sort through her recently deceased father's possessions and properties , go over highly boring (but insanely important) paperwork, redirect nosy neighbors' handsy paws off her lawn and yadda yadda yadda. But things take a turn for the bizzare when she gets thrown in the middle of a ritual to resurrect a crazy old lady's dead son and suddenly, Ollie's summer becomes everything but boring.
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