Chapter 0 - pg 34
Nov 08, 2017
I've been feeling a little bit stuck regarding the way I draw the comic, so if any of you have any critique or think I should improve something about the style, please tell me in the comments!!!!!
Only one page this time because the flow the story has had lately has been a little weird I think
iwels
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Hey there~ I actually like the setting and pacing of the story ;) the way you draw each panel is also good, there's a sequence and the reader understands where to look. There may be some improving to do with your art but right now your style is not an inconvenient to keep the story going ^^ and as you keep drawing and practicing your art will improve. Is this your first comic? I believe it's starting really great and the characters are very memorable, cheers to that! (sorry if there's any mistakes i speak spanish)
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