part 4 - a question
Dec 21, 2017
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I have received much feedback from my school peers on this project, but I would love to know, a somewhat anonymous reader on the internet, thinks of this project so far.
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The concept is an abstract one, but interesting and well explained. The art style beautifully suited the concept. It reminded me of some of the more abstract musings in Go Get a Roomie, and made me think of Dirk Gentley's Holistic Detective Agency and the interconnectedness of all things. Then I went cross eyed, got a headache and had to have a lie down ;-p
There is a lot to take in on each page, which is a little bit daunting, I wonder whether it could be broken down further to help the reader digest the concept and story?
Ooh, I remembered another thing, I like the use of different typefaces for different characters speech. That made the conversation flow easier to follow.
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