open the door of twilight (20 pages)
Jun 25, 2013
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1000 years after a great war history repeats itself when a young boy discovers he has a special power and must go on a journey to save his world from the return of a powerful monster
(this ch has been revised)
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feels like the story gets to the meat too quickly.
by the time that there's drama, there's no connection to any of the characters, plus there's a couple of spelling errors and continuity problems that could be fixed by panel work and spell checking.
might want to practice anatomy as well
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