ch. 2 pt 2
Feb 09, 2018
Our MC is starting to notice the changes to his body... they might be a good thing... but maybe a bad thing too?
Neila
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I think a bit of the sequence in this update is a touch confusing. He transforms and then I think there's a time skip ahead to him asking more about the powers. I kinda feel skipping the battle entirely leaves it a little open ended before the next transformation. The only typo I spotted was in one of the first pages he says "a few changes has helped" when it may read a little easier as "a few changes have helped." Another gorgeous update. I love your characters and sense of design as always! 💜💜💜💜
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