BURNING.1(TEXT REPOLISHED)
Jul 02, 2023
I am not a native English speaker, so there may be some mistakes in the text. I would be very thankful if you could point them out for me. Also, I started working on this series when I was a college student, and that was many years ago. Thus, the characters may look different as the pages pass by.
Thank you for reading this far, hope you enjoy my story!
Hjppojuice
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This looks so professional, AND you have a stunning style! Love it, you'll surely go far :)
Your english sounds great, however there are some words that are spliced by mistake, I marked them for you.
- it is said that youand (you and) a group of friends
- we are jusr(just) friends
- i just want to make sure theydidn't(they didn't)
- Airight(alright), let's get started
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