to me this looks like a really interesting comic. i just don't understand the "powers " thing. Maybe if you put in a bit more backstory, you've already tried to do that i see. but to me, it just feels a little rushed. here's an idea (and it is a pretty brand new prompt its just a suggestion) maybe henry goes missing first and then Caleb and Savvy go looking for him instead. back to the powers, i just don't understand them. not saying they're bad just, IDK. they dont really seem to have a point. but then again this is only the first episode :). i honestly really do look forward to seeing what you do next.
Plot: After Savvy escapes the locked room, Caleb runs into her forcing the siblings to work together and make their way around the studio without getting killed or separated. Eventually, they find Henry and free him before the ink demon finds him first! What will come out of this unlikely duo’s efforts of cooperating? We’ll just have to wait and see!
Note: This comic is loosely based off of Bendy Chapter 4: Colossal Wonders, along with my own added ideas and storyline, so I ask that you give this series a chance and hope you enjoy it. :)