I'll just give my overall about it in the first part (forewarning this will be long-winded)

This piece hits deep a raw, heartfelt dive into young love, self-discovery, and the unshakable tension of emotions unspoken. Your art style? Soft, but sharp where it counts expressions that pull the audience in, colors that cradle the moment, and pacing that doesn’t just tell a story, but makes us feel it.

Jamie & Damien Feel Real – Their emotions aren’t just told, they’re felt. Jamie’s confidence wavering in the face of something unexpected, Damien’s internal battle between fear and courage, it’s all so genuine. The way they interact, hesitate, and build toward their moment makes their story incredibly relatable and heartfelt.

This isn’t just a romance it’s a story of self-discovery?(If wrong do please correct me) The pacing is spot-on, letting us watch Jamie and Damien’s relationship unfold naturally. From Jamie’s inner monologue to Damien’s anxious yet determined realization, every piece falls into place with authenticity. The heart flower exchange isn’t just sweet it’s earned.

The subtle hesitations, the way Damien grips his hoodie, Jamie’s gradual shift from teasing to flustered. These small details elevate the emotions, making the characters feel incredibly alive. The warm pink hues and soft shading create a world that feels like a memory wrapped in nostalgia. The setting enhances the emotions, making the vulnerability in each moment stand out even more. It’s cozy, yet tense.

The story captures the fear, the longing, the unexpected joy of realizing you want to be more than just best friends. It’s about having the courage to love, even when it’s terrifying.