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Where It All Began

Where It All Began

May 25, 2020

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Season 1

Arc : Genesis

Location : Bloemfontein , Free State , South Africa.

Time : 10 : 36

" Even though it's 10:36 , it's awfully quiet around the central business district of the city. People are usually pacing up and down the city like minions from "Despicable me" . I don't even know how I got up a 7 feet tall building , things are as confusing and complicated as my life "

The 17 year old young man would be seen on top of a building alone but it was intruiging how the world around him was absent , only sounds of wind blowing from the south directions colliding with the uneven urbanised structures and buildings around the city .Sounds of birds whom are hovering around the city without a care in the world and other animals .The smell of fresh unpolluted air that filled the city rather than the dust particles and pollunated air that filled the skies in which they are caused by the industrial revolutions happening around the city and the overpopulation around the city. It seems like one of those post apocalyptic stories that we don't want to watch alone in the middle of the night unless if you a psychopath like science implies.

In this clean world that seemed picture perfect , this young man would be seen taking slow steps heading backwards , wearing black and white coloured sneakers , a black denim jean , with a long white plain shirt. He would crouch down , taking a stance that implied that he was in a running athletics competition but where was he intendeding to run off to as his on top of a building ?

He would slowly remove the strain of hair on the left side of his eye that blocked his vision ,then ran his hand on his hair in which he only got it shortened on the sides and tied a ponytail . The hair had no funky colours , it was his traditional black coloured hair. His eyes would be closed as he took a deep breath with everything around him turning grey in color with footsteps been heard , each footstep making a loud sound which resembled power ,dominance and finally confidence.

"Don't chicken out now mate , imagine climbing a building that has 72 floors , when you arrive at the top then you start hesistating , now that's what I call being a coward. Also remember that you'll be making one happy , no one would even notice that you are gone and their lives will improve for the better as you are a burden and an obstacle that's blocks their way to success and happiness"

It would be seen leaning in and whispering those words near his ear , with it's long tongue filled with saliva dripping all over the place , wrapping itself around his ear , it's appearance would be odd as it was inhuman and had extraterrestrial feats on it , black in colour with veins running all over it , white coloured eyes that have no aqueous humor or lens in them.

He would open his eyes , flashing his dark green with light green linings as he would start running , leaving a cracked ground floor and a little dust as he would jump off the building , the impact of the force he used would make the hard blowing wind , blow his so hard that he would manage to do blackflips while descending from the building . Few moments he regained control but was heading head first towards the ground ,covering 5 metres in 20 seconds.

He would crash down , near the empty road and from the smokescreen , his detached head would be seen flying , surprisely not crushed to pieces as it would roll towards the other side of the road. From the Impact his head would have only the right eye detached from the eye socket , his jaw would be crushed one side and dismantled , some of the bones from the skull would've ripped through his skin .The left side of his head would be without hair , with the skull showing with cracks on it also and the top side of the neck be seen showing that a platfrom in the road detached the body and head .Pool of blood around would be seen laying around the body and the head

"Hey Neo! Snap Out Of It , Class Is About To Start . Let's Get Going!!"

A female's voice would be heard as the young lad who was now sitting at the stairs with his school uniform , hands on his head would rise up then start walking towards the girl

This is a story about a african boy called Neo Smith, that has depression but found a perfect coping mechanism to his mental disorder , and what you were reading , was one of his suicidal thoughts.

<< Chapter 2 : Coping Mechanism >>

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D I S O R D E R
D I S O R D E R

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Neo Smith , a socially distant boy that has depression because of his dog dying and being a constant disappointment to his parents

Since those events happened , he went under an extreme emotional distress that caused him to be stuck in an emotionaless or numb state making him similar to a person that has autism and that shut off his sense to feel

Hasn't shown any signs of different emotions for several years until he found a perfect coping mechanism to his mental disorder

The stpry takes place in a futuristic world in 2178 , at South Africa , Free State Province in Bloemfontein
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