Chapter 1
May 30, 2018
andreasmann92
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Hey man, I saw your post on reddit where you asked for feedback for your comic. I'll be as honest as I can. For a first episode you broke the ice really well. In only a few panels you made me laugh several times. The booger was just stupid and over the top (I love it) and when he inhaled it I just burst out in laughter. We all can relate to that and that's what makes it funny. The art isn't bad at all, but you should figure out how to get rid of the jagged edges. The only thing I dislike are the long silly names, it honestly annoyed me a little. It was funny, so I'll read a few more x)
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