ILLUSIONS - prologue
Sep 08, 2017
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"there were a magical kingdom..." --> "there was a..."
"there were tow kinds of magic dark..."-->"there were two kinds of magic, dark..."
"...were the sons of the king"-->"...were the king's children/children of the king's"
"To find heros who...."-->"To find heroes who..."
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