The illustrations are very vibrant and detailed. My favorite part of the art are the backgrounds, which are very beautiful; they make me feel like I'm in the world. The people also look great and well structured. The anatomy and poses are well-drawn. My only issue is with the grammar, its very confusing and is difficult to follow. Overall you did a great job!
It is the story of a boy. He was in his freshman year at college. He was liked by everyone.
However, there were actually two people who fell in love with him.
Shawn, did he ever feel the same way?
If he felt that way, who was that person?
This was the beginning of their story.
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