Prologue
May 21, 2020
This is a soft reboot of the series. Hope you enjoy.
Lunarsun
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SO, this is a one shot then. I hate that because this is really interesting. This is really good, but your prologue and the start of your story is a bit jarring. I think you need a title page there, something to state the name of your story, and to also put a Transition from your prologue and your actual story.
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