Chapter I: The Deal [1-31]
Jul 09, 2023
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I love it! The way you draw people is so expressive and unique. I especially love that I can sense a distinct personality from each character based on how you’ve crafted their appearance, and I enjoy the small details that you’ve put into the art, like Abel’s eyebags and how he so casually keeps posing in the bathroom scene. I can’t believe more people haven’t found this comic, but I wish you the best of luck.
P.S. one thing I would like to say is that while I’ve been reading this on mobile the font you’re using makes it very difficult to read some of the conversations because the letters look very similar and are squished together. A different font might make the conversations and the plot easier to follow; but you’ve written many pages already, so I would understand if you’d want to keep it the same for consistency.
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