I like your colors and shading. The mc’s design is cool + memorable.
Fight choreography wasn’t too clear. The hits didn’t have much weight to them. Would’ve liked a better look at the robot she was fighting too. It’s like a subway car with insect legs, that’s pretty cool.
Not sure what her reaction at the end is. Even if she’s a calm/collected type, some readable reaction after having her arm chopped would’ve felt better there.
Nobody knows what happened to our planet, nobody knows its true name, or who built the planet-sized, vast mechanical shell upon its surface. Only the "Apotheoized Operators", humans enhanced by mysterious bioengineering technology excavated from the shell, can survive the cold and desolate surface world. And now, one young man "blessed" by this power must traverse this wasteland, to deliver his most important cargo to one of the last bastions of humanity.
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